It's great to see a woman with everything in proportion, instead of grotesquely oversized breasts like so many other female characters on this site. For me, that extra realism made her a lot sexier. This was quite a well-drawn strip.
Dus it really mater if its a rerite or not? as long as its good?
Annonymous - 18 August 2008 23:19
Depends on the quality of the rewrite.
If I see "Yeah! It's time to fuck mom!" in a sentimental panel, I'm gonna look away.
Then again, it's up to you.
(On another note, there was no actual pregnancy, huh...?)
You... have no right to criticize if you don't even have the balls to bake a screen name for it.
Annonymous - 9 December 2008 22:39
It's a piece of cake to bake a pretty cake
if the way is hazy
you gotta do the cooking by the book
you know you can't be lazy
never use a messy recipe
the cake would end up crazy
if you do it by the book
then you'll have a cake
we gotta have it made you know
that I love cake
finally it's time to make a cake
No he has a right to complain, in most case rewrites suck and change the entire story to something really lame and in most cases makes it an incest story when it really isn't. The worse ones are when for unknown reasons they change a brother/sister incest manga into father/daughter and you can clearly see he's too young to be a dad. Another one on here was just a teacher of a little girl and her dad getting it on, changed to make the teacher and her dad brother and sister, the original story would better without it being forced to be incest.
if you don't like it don't read it, and stop complaining. most of the rewriters are friends of mine. have some fucking gratitude for the people who make the material you jack off to. jesus christ.
Annonymous - 25 September 2008 8:01
Hey YDKJMF, STFU. What you're saying doesn't make any sense. Most people would probably prefer a non-translated manga to a terrible re-write. You can't totally ignore shitty obnoxious fake dialogue, but you can imagine what the story is without it. I guarantee people aren't jerking off because of a shitty story. Why should people stop complaining? Because some incredibly illogical arrogant asshole is offended (and complaining himself, I might add)? Even though you posted this, I've seen it elsewhere and it probably would've been posted here eventually anyway. Furthermore, those who think the dialogue here sucks are full of shit. The real issue is: if this really is a re-write, WHY THE FUCK ISN'T IT TAGGED AS SUCH?!!!
P.S. "You have no right to criticize if you don't even have the balls to bake a screen name for it." by ANONYMOUS has no argument and is totally hypocritical (criticizing criticism is criticism). Fucking jackass.
Annonymous - 15 November 2008 11:47
how dare you talk that way to the greatest person ever!!! *eats your head*
WHAT THE FUCK IS THE MATTER WITH ALL OF YOU!?!?! STOP ARGUING AND JUST JACK OFF! IF YOU DON'T LIKE INCEST, GO SOMEWHERE ELSE!
that's one ugly ass mothefucker literaly sick shit
and I like it ^^
dude longest debate ever!
It's great to see a woman with everything in proportion, instead of grotesquely oversized breasts like so many other female characters on this site. For me, that extra realism made her a lot sexier. This was quite a well-drawn strip.
That's SO true!
This is very hot! I liked this series. Thanks for posting it! Wish the pregnancy thing would go farther though...
Uh...WOW a dad/brother how awkward..
The grammar is pretty weak.
Only time will tell if she manages to get pregnant with her son's child.
Why the hell are they wrapped in a joint?
lol thier kid is gonna have a brother/dad
Loved it, Loved it. Would like to see it go farther especially with the pregnancy thin. Kinda weird.
Wow isnt into girls but this was hot
lol im not into girls either im into WOMEN LOL
great story
Dus it really mater if its a rerite or not? as long as its good?
Depends on the quality of the rewrite.
If I see "Yeah! It's time to fuck mom!" in a sentimental panel, I'm gonna look away.
Then again, it's up to you.
(On another note, there was no actual pregnancy, huh...?)
Ahh like every other woman his mom expects a life long commitment after a few fuck sessions...
*Make. And it seems to not display the name I put in...
You... have no right to criticize if you don't even have the balls to bake a screen name for it.
It's a piece of cake to bake a pretty cake
if the way is hazy
you gotta do the cooking by the book
you know you can't be lazy
never use a messy recipe
the cake would end up crazy
if you do it by the book
then you'll have a cake
we gotta have it made you know
that I love cake
finally it's time to make a cake
You have no right to criticize if you don't even have the balls to bake a screen name for it.
is very good that has earned another legal december...
I think most re-writes may be trolls.
You can't just make up story lines like that without being conscious of the shit you're writing.
This is not a bad rewrite though. Not like I ever bother to read the bubbles anyways.
great story is great! But what would Chris Hansen say to this? =O
that would be funny as hell to see what would happen
i love this kind of story. but i wish the mom was hotter.
the mom looks good enough, there's no need for her to be overdone.
-___-***
ive seen better, agree with the prev post!
i like it. but that would be wierd.
that would be an interesting story to tell the kids...
just imagine... your mom also being your grandmother...
LOL like a hillbilly
cute horny mother
She was hotter in her apron
Please, stop posting rewrites.
Just post real translations or originals with japanese text.
stop complaining
No he has a right to complain, in most case rewrites suck and change the entire story to something really lame and in most cases makes it an incest story when it really isn't. The worse ones are when for unknown reasons they change a brother/sister incest manga into father/daughter and you can clearly see he's too young to be a dad. Another one on here was just a teacher of a little girl and her dad getting it on, changed to make the teacher and her dad brother and sister, the original story would better without it being forced to be incest.
if you don't like it don't read it, and stop complaining. most of the rewriters are friends of mine. have some fucking gratitude for the people who make the material you jack off to. jesus christ.
Hey YDKJMF, STFU. What you're saying doesn't make any sense. Most people would probably prefer a non-translated manga to a terrible re-write. You can't totally ignore shitty obnoxious fake dialogue, but you can imagine what the story is without it. I guarantee people aren't jerking off because of a shitty story. Why should people stop complaining? Because some incredibly illogical arrogant asshole is offended (and complaining himself, I might add)? Even though you posted this, I've seen it elsewhere and it probably would've been posted here eventually anyway. Furthermore, those who think the dialogue here sucks are full of shit. The real issue is: if this really is a re-write, WHY THE FUCK ISN'T IT TAGGED AS SUCH?!!!
P.S. "You have no right to criticize if you don't even have the balls to bake a screen name for it." by ANONYMOUS has no argument and is totally hypocritical (criticizing criticism is criticism). Fucking jackass.
how dare you talk that way to the greatest person ever!!! *eats your head*
The Japanese artists are the ones who make the material, re-writers just re-work what's already there.
That may be true, but you don't have to be an ass about it.
I have to side with you on that one.
this is wierd and great