newdog, you should be called goddog. i'm already laughing. i payed more attention to your work then the fucking.

i lol'd a little but the goddamn vocabulary is so over the top that after a while all the words just run together kinda feels like im reading one big run on sentence you know like the kind of one that you dont even want to read because it just looks like a bunch of words jumbled together just to express one thought that seems to just go on forever you know kind of like spending the day with paris hilton, it doesnt matter what she looks like because at the end of the day shes talked so much shit that you dont know where the fuck you are and youve decided that youve found your true calling in life and now all those years in med school are going to pay off because all you ever want to do is give lobotomies you know its like a fresh spring morning after a bear has killed your children.

Newdog continues to deliver the lulz. I'm so grateful to this guy, whoever he is, because his rewrites are some of the funniest stuff on the interwebs.

Loving the title,hopefully the Mark Twain fans among us perverted fap-fiends will get it.

"Newdog51"
"Reads left to right, that's how things are done in the civilized world"
"Fireworks noise"
"Great Scott!"

I was originally planning on jacking off to this, but now I see it is impossible. Oh well, off to a good laugh.

Ahaha! This is brilliant!

Not exactly A+ fapping material, but it's still bloody brilliant.

Bravo!

Already, I can see myself possibly dying from laughter.

so this is newdog's work? why can't i stop laughing?

Much love from the op you know who i am newdog

Great Grammar. Not sure why it is required to have great grammar in an Incest Hentai Comic though.

the vocabulary in this is very good, and the grammar is as well, but the script is mostly stupid :/
On the flip side it is clever at points.

Also the original manga is on here, I can't remember the name though....

"Fire works noise" Helps me imagine so much better than "bang"