have to start somewhere...
more plot twists...
some character development,
some background scenery
keep banging 'em rocks together.
Annonymous - 18 March 2008 17:20
Annonymous - 12 February 2008 12:47
LOL nothing i ever saw before made me laugh so hard ROFL Snake, are you sure you didn't mean it as a caricature? Fuck I had to laugh so hard I almost dropped from my chair to the Floor OMG this one is SO Badly drawn that it is almost good again... almost. really looks childish and everything. Learn how to draw proper hentai, Snake, then draw this one again... besides, the story is absolutely FLAT. There's nothing there that makes it good, it's just horrible. Only thing I can say is: it gave me a hell of a good laugh! ROFL OMG i can't stop laughing.... LOOOOOL how bad is that i really wonder why the webmaster don't deletes it....
not bad dude, borderline artwork, which is simple to do, and fun to make. I look forward to seeing more and shall even sumbit some of my own stuff soon. To Snakeboot fine job, long my you be popular.
Me - 3 November 2007 17:09
i thought i was fucking great. fuck them
Alastor - 1 November 2007 21:03
Survey sez: YES!
As much as I hate lousy character development, it seems the "immoral" stuff doesn't get fair treatment. Sucks, but, oh well...
Annonymous - 29 October 2007 18:23
Tell Snake8Root to learn how to draw before trying another one of his stories. The infantile sketches completely destroy anything sexy that could be in there.
Annonymous - 29 October 2007 18:07
The sketches are lousy, and the story is as fucking cheap as most of the stories here.
Does incest have to be so aggressive and cheap?
darkmatter - 28 October 2007 12:57
ehhh... one little advice learn how to draw.
Snake8Root - 27 October 2007 18:00
When I get an idea for a series it's usually an image or a scene. This was actually the first image I "saw" when thinking of a series to do. The Son tells his Mother he'll never hurt her--whereupon she throws him onto the floor and rips her clothes off: "Hurt me? FUCK ME! Make me SCREAM, damn you!" And I went, "Hot damn, OK! Here we go--!" and I sat down and drew it out.
Snake8Root - 27 October 2007 17:51
"Big Brother Crush* was one of my earliest ones. Although I greatly enjoy incest-themed hentai, far too often the Brother is practically raping his Sister. I wanted to show a big Brother who truly loved and cared for his sweet little Sister.
When someone trashes my work and yet thousands download it every day, I know who to listen to.
XD - 27 October 2007 1:05
This thing is pretty fuck. Its not even hentai. It's like a american bastard porn cartoon. XD
Reijikun - 26 October 2007 21:34
Go Snake go!
Reijikun - 26 October 2007 21:33
Woohoo! Keep it coming Snake!
Reijikun - 26 October 2007 21:32
Rock on Snake! Rock on!
-_- - 26 October 2007 20:38
Whoever is the author of these things is really bad. All of his works are horrible an unappealing.
Æon - 26 October 2007 12:22
This shit is fucking horrible. Take some drawing classes then come back in a few years. Also, don't draw on fucking notecards.
Flashcard pr0n
This is so Hawt
what the hell... this should be deletted, not like i'm being disespectful but it sucks hard, imagine everybody would upload their shitty mangas xD.
index cards
this is shit
what awful art work...
i really liked it, the only problem was they kept saying things like "I want us to make love" and "I want us to be lovers" all through the story
Lol.........WTF
Good but not my thing man
Bad scene :\
I want a daughter like this.
have to start somewhere...
more plot twists...
some character development,
some background scenery
keep banging 'em rocks together.
LOL nothing i ever saw before made me laugh so hard ROFL Snake, are you sure you didn't mean it as a caricature? Fuck I had to laugh so hard I almost dropped from my chair to the Floor OMG this one is SO Badly drawn that it is almost good again... almost. really looks childish and everything. Learn how to draw proper hentai, Snake, then draw this one again... besides, the story is absolutely FLAT. There's nothing there that makes it good, it's just horrible. Only thing I can say is: it gave me a hell of a good laugh! ROFL OMG i can't stop laughing.... LOOOOOL how bad is that i really wonder why the webmaster don't deletes it....
wow 1/16 pages is good
Different but good.
Same, this was fucking awesome, last page made me lol.
Its funny how the people that probably can't draw at all are the ones insulting.
Great job snake, its good to have you on board.
lol, wheres your art darkmatter?
not bad dude, borderline artwork, which is simple to do, and fun to make. I look forward to seeing more and shall even sumbit some of my own stuff soon. To Snakeboot fine job, long my you be popular.
i thought i was fucking great. fuck them
Survey sez: YES!
As much as I hate lousy character development, it seems the "immoral" stuff doesn't get fair treatment. Sucks, but, oh well...
Tell Snake8Root to learn how to draw before trying another one of his stories. The infantile sketches completely destroy anything sexy that could be in there.
The sketches are lousy, and the story is as fucking cheap as most of the stories here.
Does incest have to be so aggressive and cheap?
ehhh... one little advice learn how to draw.
When I get an idea for a series it's usually an image or a scene. This was actually the first image I "saw" when thinking of a series to do. The Son tells his Mother he'll never hurt her--whereupon she throws him onto the floor and rips her clothes off: "Hurt me? FUCK ME! Make me SCREAM, damn you!" And I went, "Hot damn, OK! Here we go--!" and I sat down and drew it out.
"Big Brother Crush* was one of my earliest ones. Although I greatly enjoy incest-themed hentai, far too often the Brother is practically raping his Sister. I wanted to show a big Brother who truly loved and cared for his sweet little Sister.
When someone trashes my work and yet thousands download it every day, I know who to listen to.
This thing is pretty fuck. Its not even hentai. It's like a american bastard porn cartoon. XD
Go Snake go!
Woohoo! Keep it coming Snake!
Rock on Snake! Rock on!
Whoever is the author of these things is really bad. All of his works are horrible an unappealing.
This shit is fucking horrible. Take some drawing classes then come back in a few years. Also, don't draw on fucking notecards.
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